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Sunday, March 4, 2012

Journey....

I gaze out of the window I maintain a mental note,
Iam lost in various  thoughts and
the silly habit of listening to 1 poison of a song
again and again goes on ...I see the fields passing by
the train moves fast leaving them far behind..
some people gaze out i see them in the eye
i forget their faces n i too move by
the life carries on like this train
a moment of bliss is like that eye contact with that stranger on the way
who remains special but yes life asks u to move away.like friendship,like love everything
has to pass by for better or worse i remain still either in the moment just gone by...
No matter how much ever i try the moment passes away..eyes get moist i wipe my tears away..
i gaze out of the window for that special moment again ..life goes by and takes me away ...

10 comments:

  1. bang on...it did make ma eyez moist...these momentz go really fast and no matter what you do, you end up alone, not knowin who you are or what you really wanted!

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  2. hey su mast likha hai re:-) i think jo bhi trains mein travel karte hai sabko aise feelings ate rahenge kabhi na kabhi;-) nice poetic description;-)

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    1. thanks haneesh tune small summary de diya poem ka ;)

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  3. sahi hain su......liked it :-)

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  4. I was always sure your way too talented, but this is too good su. very well placed words.. please continue to update.

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